( Ebook The Second Realm: A LitRPG Fantasy Series (The Ten Realms Livre 2) ) í Michael Chatfield – and–rey.us
Michael Chatfield Ç 9 REVIEWI m totally loving this series Both MCs work learn and fight their way upward with true grit and determination The whole world has such detail and depth that it s fascinating all on it s own which makes the story even better Any avid eader of LITRPG will find this series is a top pick for their eading list I can t wait to see what happens next Fantastic ead lots going on and interesting things happening on every page Can t wait for next book The Third Realm Thanks Michael I think it much like it s predecessor is a ather good ead But like the like it s predecessor is a ather good ead But like the of this eview suggests it "S Riddled With Minor Grammatical "riddled with minor grammatical throughout Misspelling of character names is also another fault but my biggest thing that This book follows on from book one and follows Eric and Rugrat s shenanigans in the 2nd ealm a lot of crafting a fair bit of fighting and a considerable amount of travelling across the 2nd ealm I truly enjoyed this book probably even than Loving the story but the editing WowI ve never come across a finished published and paid book that was so iddled with spelling errors grammatical errors font changes andom capitalisation numbers in the middle of words paragraphs that start in the middle of a sentence etcI can t comprehend how this was deemed publishable however the story is fantastic so I ll ead the next one Awesome followup want Has good basecity building and the world s society is very interesting Strength ules all Like the idea of the main characters improving themselves in such a hostile world as well as them trying to improve the lives of those they care about Good story. When Erik and Rugrat entered the ten ealms they didnt know what was going on They only knew that they had contracted the two week curseWhen entering the second ealm they came to understand their character sheets and part of the system that is called the ten ealms A place that the strong. And have gone on to ead the next in the seriesHowever the kindle
EDITION IS PLAGUED WITH FORMATTING ERRORSis plagued with formatting errors are spelling and grammar mistakes on every page the font size and formatting is all over the place Most of this would have been sorted with a simple un through with a spell checker the est with a proof eader To elease it in this fashion is pretty poorA shame as the story itself is very engaging and I enjoyed it s great deal 4 12 StarsMy personal ating system1 Star Couldn t finish the book2 Stars Didn t eally like the book but was interested enough in the story to finish Skipping great chunks3 Stars The book was okay finished it and will "consider eading from the author4 Stars Really enjoyed the book will "reading from the author4 Stars Really enjoyed the book will out others by this author4 12 Stars Loved the book will immediately check out others by author if asked will ecommend book5 Stars LOVED the book will immediately check out all others by author will pre emptively ecommend book to ALL my book friendsI loved it and expect I ll be ereading it again in the future This book Is A Solid 4 And a solid 4 and half stars which I ve bumped up to five as doesn t do half stars The only small problem I had with it is that when showing the levelling stats the publisher uses eual signs ather than dashes Normally this wouldn t be a problem but I listen to my books for hours while driving and as I use the kindle text to speech I find myself listening to about ten euals euals euals euals etc Then you get a sentence and another ten epeats of euals Have that happen ten times in two pages and it gets old FAST Without that I d give this book it s Make the ules and the weak cling to them for protection and hope that they might be left in peaceThey passed through the trials of the Beast Mountain Dungeon taking control of it and becoming the leader of nearly two hundred peopleNow in command of the Alva Dungeon and looking to forge
Ell deserved 5 stars I love the crafting in this and the constant pace Lost a star as there a uite a few typos in the book and a number of sentences that I could not Decipher Great Story And I Will Be Great story and I will be awaiting the seuel Loved the characters story and the world that is being built Looking forward to the next book in the series As of the time I ead this 251118 the number of spelling and grammatical errors in this book eally bugged me along with the occasional andom change in font size Many words are just completely wrong as if spell check has been allowed to un ampant and change fix most of the spelling mistakes with the wrong wordsI don t claim to be a perfect grammatical genius but when publishing a book it should surely be proof ead and checked by a few people first and any glaring errors of which there were many can be emedied before being publishedIf not for these Issues I Would Have Given This A 5 Star Rating I would have given this a 5 star ating the story and world have been thought out in incredible detail Hats off to the author for creating a great story and here is to hoping that the third instalment delivers just as well as this one I have enjoyed the series so far the mechanics of the world are clear and easy to understand "a lot of the excess jargon has been shaved out of it to allow a good merging of game "lot of the excess jargon has been shaved out of it to allow a good merging of game with a form of eality My only criticism would be the excess amount of telling with very little showing in how the story is presented While this doesn t break my enjoyment of the books I think a little show and less tell would add to the immersion and bring out the stories full potentia. New future they needpower mana stones dungeon cores monster cores if not then the Dungeon will stop functioning and they will need to elocate once againAs they ascend to the second ealm Erik and Rugrat need to grow their skills gain information and find a dungeon Its hardly ever that ea.